Spoiler - "A True Gator Party"

The revised draft of A True Gator Party is actually about 25 pages longer, currently, than the original version.

The major change worth mentioning is that the prologue - not written in the original but added afterwards - has been modified. We now have an opening chapter that provides an "historical" context for the novel, as well as a chapter that chronicles a major falling-out between Mike and some of the other characters. I also expanded the original prologue (now Chapter 3) to continue that theme as well as add more "face time" for other characters that figure prominently later on.

We've also been tweaking each chapter as I go to highlight previously unplanned themes (such as Mike's romantic interest), and to remove all sci-fi refrences (as they are largely unnecessary).